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The National Railway Museum
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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Tim Ward (tward007au) (6) |
| Genre: People |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2004-12-30 |
| Categories: Transportation |
| Exposure: f/4.5, 1/60 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2005-03-09 6:22 |
| Viewed: 374 |
| Points: 4 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
Here is a picture of my young son on his first visit to the National Railway museum. He had a ball, and I was glad I captured this moment.
The original photo was a bit cool and grey due to the large train sheds with unusual lighting and so managed to warm up a little bit in PP, which more accurately captures the mood. |
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Hi there Tim , Welcome to TL hope you enjoy your stay here.
I think alot of people might say that the black space on the right hand side are a bit too much and that the photo might need some crop work. Now you can go 2 ways about this , the first is how you did it and i like this way and i will say now why and then to crop it to give some more space on the left hand side. The black makes your sun stand out nicely in the photo , i do think that if you where to crop the picture it would not be as nicely captured as it is now.
Nice shot. Awesome focus. Well Done.
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(1241) - [2005-03-10 13:57]
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What a fine looking young man! You must be proud Tim. I love the happy expression you captured, but agree with previos critique. Maybe you can re-post? Welcome to TL!
