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Nice hair
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Copyright: Peter Traynor (chefcop) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 781 W: 48 N: 491] (4638)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-01-11 4:24
Viewed: 1032
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Sitting in a pub in Nottingham with my brother noticed this young lady behind the bar and took a picture.
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Nice human interest shot Peter. Did her hair stand on end in fright when she spotted you !!
Regards, Paul.

The way she put her hand, i was think about a Vvan Der Graff generator (Not shure the spelling). It's a dome who produce static electricity. When you put your hand on it, your hair become like that! Good shot!

Hi Peter.

Very nice capture. I like your "model".
I would have preffered a tighter crop, focusing on her. But that's my opinion.

I'll try a workshop later.

Cheers Jorn

Since I have seen your last composition, I cannot resist to give compliments on this one, this tenant is splendid and you did well for the photo. I mean just a reaction to the demand of "un petit blanc" can give this reaction and the shot must be so tight to the event..
I like it
Jean Michel

How humorous! It takes me back to 1980's! I love the expression on her face. While she is so posed, her face is so coy. She knows exactly why you're taking her picture and it makes her giggle...so frank. However, I would've cropped in a little closer. The bottom end of the bar doesn't really add to the image....maybe just recompose up a bit...the top and middle area are fine because they give her picture a sense of place. I don't like the workshop image too much...it looks like an advertisement for the "T"-pilsner drink...but, I do like how Jorn handled the bar table. Good shot.

Hi Pete, i guess its a spur of the moment pic, but maybe a post capture edit in CS and take out the bright lampshade, find it a bit distracting. Rob

I love this one Peter, very nice picture and I like the way the waitress looks at you, very nice. The last time I heard about Nottingham, it is with Robin Wood and the Sheriff of Nottingham. You are very lucky to go place like this. I am jalous.
Best regards
Guy

Peter I hope you are not the reason for this hair display. LOL Just joking, real nice shot, interesting and funny .
Vassilis

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  • luro Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 3 N: 24] (160)
  • [2006-05-17 5:12]

Hi Peter,

Interesting hair style and a wonderful smile. Just wondering what caused it....the hair I mean. Something you said..HA HA. Well done and TFS

That's an electrical look!!!!!

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