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#5
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Copyright: emanuela gr (emanuela) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 226 W: 16 N: 8] (1013)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-11-12
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), 18-55mm
Exposure: f/8, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-03-07 13:53
Viewed: 753
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 26
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excellent b&w, perfect contrast... peacefull photo for me...
Artistic!

Very serene. Simple yet effective composition with excellent lighting and contrast.

Well Done,
David

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  • eBirdy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 206 W: 1 N: 61] (1548)
  • [2007-03-07 14:53]

Hi Emanuela,
Simple, ideal for a B&W... Maybe missing a bit of sharpness, but on the other hand, it is also suitable a certain loss of detail here... Regards, Marta

Hi Emanuela
Very good bw shot, unusual increasing the contrast was good idea in this pic, i like the details and the composition..
well done
ali

hi there, #5 is ok. is it short enough? thanks

Very simple, ordinary scene, but it makes a good picture for some reason. I think it was the good lighting and your POV. Nice job.
Thanks for sharing,
Leanne

I normally don't critique photos without a note - I feel a little alienated by the photographer - but in this case I felt your shot was beautiful enough to warrant some attention.
I'm no expert, but I suspect that adding gradient to the sky in this photo will create a whole new feeling for it. I'll upload an example into the workshop, I'm keen to know what you think!
cheers
Rew

the train
it is passing by
you are stopping with your capturing
your thinking stay somewere
your body it running away
is it a photo or poem
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thanks girl!!
you give me so much impuls!!!

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5423)
  • [2007-03-08 12:35]

This is my first time in your wonderful gallery. This photo here is simple but very effective and a superb composition.

Thanks for visiting and commenting on my photo, "Naperville Winter".

Andre'

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  • laine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 376 W: 37 N: 106] (877)
  • [2007-03-09 6:48]

Minimalism in nature!
Well seen and captured, Emanuela!
Love the choice of b&w here!
Thanks for sharing!
Laine

Ciao Emanuela,
I really like your minimalistic B/W landscape shots!
Maybe on this one I'd have put a hairline black border!!? :) It's just the matter of taste!
cheers
ToM

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  • KrL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 520 W: 123 N: 488] (7367)
  • [2007-06-02 5:24]

Bonjour Emanuela,
Hier je n'ai pas eu le temps de visiter ta galerie, c'est chose faite.
J'aime beaucoup la manière dont tu as d'utiliser le noir & blanc, tout est plus intense !
TFS

Karèle

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3574 W: 737 N: 2406] (19100)
  • [2007-06-05 7:12]

I've just discovered your wonderful photos.
Congrats !!!


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