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• elise (417)
• [2005-02-18 20:57]

Funny and well captured shot. I would try to ajust the horizon line to make it staight.

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• wayne (0)
• [2005-02-18 23:05]

like elise mentioned, fix the horizon line and it will be stronger

tecnically, there is no reason to shoot people from afar in daylight at f/2.8, also the focus seems to be on the background and not on the people. increasing your f stops also increases your DOF. lastly, it is overexposed as you can see their skin tones are washed out. sorry to be harsh but there are too many problems with this picture, though I do give you credit for the content. cheers and good luck!

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• fooeleen (2316)
• [2005-02-19 4:33]
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hi, welcome to Treklens, Fakrul. i made a workshop to correct the horizon, other than that i like the expressions you captured here. there look like they are squinting towards the sun, so i think the over exposure adds the feeling of the sun on them. keep posting, i;ve learn a lot from here, hope u will too:)

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• bult (1037)
• [2005-02-20 17:42]

I just love how this one guy looks down, with a face that doesn't look too happy... Nice one