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The Untold Story


The Untold Story
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Copyright: Boniangga Anugrah (BonBon) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 4 N: 19] (401)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-31
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL, Canon 18-55 mm f/3.5-5.6 USM, Compact Flash 2G, UV
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-06 5:11
Viewed: 518
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken just a week ago, while my friend stood by the window I notice that the available light was really stunning, then I took this picture. It wasn't cropped at all, the only that I did is the extention of the hair to the right, and I changed the tone a bit ( still with the high contrast), as for the title I choosed the untold story for you can't really see whehther it's a happy expression or a angry expression or whatsoever,hope you guys like it.
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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 782 W: 3 N: 108] (2305)
  • [2006-05-06 5:16]

Absolutely superb done.
Fantastic portrait of your friend,Boniangga.
tfs,and welcme to TL!
Viktorija

A very well detailed shot of a pretty Asian girl! The only thing that you could have improved on, is the repetition of the hair line on the right side where you extended the hair. I mean you can see the vertical lines repeating. I would have preffered if there was a soft blend of black hair right to the end, not showing a repeat pattern. Thanks for sharing.

it's amazing! well done!

Cheers,
Agata

Very nicely done, Boniangga. You are right that the light is very nice and I like your composition showing the eye & the hair but not her mouth so as you say we cannot really tell her mood. Neat idea to extend the hair on right side and well done as we can only tell if you look very closely then you realise that it is a repeated pattern. Well don!

very nice foto and the format(german)16:9 is fantastic.the hair the eyes the skinand the sharpnes is a great work thanks for this realy great foto mephistoo

If you hadn't told me about cloning the hair, you could have fooled me! But maybe only for a while... Love the concept, very well done, and you are right about the light: stunning! Good work!

Hi Boniangga,

Superb portrait! I like a lot. Excellent composition. the eye is so nice... and the hair works well.

Welcome to TL!!

ferran

this is good and nice shot,
focus and tone colors are nice.
great croping also.
but maybe if you give more lighting on her hair it will be more nice, b'coz you will get dimension and highlight on her hair.
she's have a beautiful eyes i belief.
tfs
Haldian

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