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Lucy & Emma


Lucy & Emma
Photo Information
Copyright: Mark Nicholson (Marko) Silver Note Writer [C: 4 W: 0 N: 10] (112)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-31
Categories: Friends/Family
Exposure: f/8, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-02 10:34
Viewed: 180
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I love taking pictures of my girls. It drives them mad sometimes, so I am trying to do something a little different, to keep them interested.

I took several in this position, and this was my favourite, as they weren’t looking directly at the camera. I asked them to look towards their Mum, and this is how their postures changed.

I cropped slightly, adjusted levels a very small amount, increased the contrast in the foreground and dodged the background and finally gave the USM a little twist.

I hope you like it.

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Hello Mark.
I really like this double portrait. Great colours and interesting low POV. Very good sharpness and nice framing.
Maybe there's a bit to much grass in the foreground, but overall it is a very good work.
TFS
Wojciech

Nice idea, good composition and strong saturation.

Quite blown-out on their arms unfortunately, all the detail has been lost.

Probably a quicker shutter speed would've been ideal.

  • Great 
  • mcoco Gold Star Critiquer [C: 64 W: 0 N: 1] (592)
  • [2008-06-03 12:26]

Hi Mark,

somehow i like this picture.
It's very bright and fresh.
Great POV

TFS
Marco

  • Great 
  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 548 W: 1 N: 241] (3920)
  • [2008-06-04 10:10]

ciao mark...grande composizione...bellissimi i colori...grande soggetto...complimenti..
lele

Hi Mark,
Very cute composition,
Light and colors great,
Very beautiful littles girls,lovely subjet,
Bravo,
Guylaine

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