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Spirit
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Copyright: Martin Byrne (martburn) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 7] (85)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-08-21
Categories: Humorous, Portrait
Exposure: f/4, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-11-27 14:46
Viewed: 631
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I'm quite new to portraiture, so much so that this sitter refused to be revealed in case I was rubbish.
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I saw this picture yesterday but did not get a chance to write a comment. I think it is a very humourous shot and I am not certain what it says about your portraiture talent!!! I am however wondering about the compostion as we can see the bottom of the door frames as well as the little stool she is sitting on; I think I would have like your black curtain to go completely to the floor and that the sheet over your model go to the floor as well to hide the stool. Otherwise, it is interesting to not see the eyes through the sheet...quite scary actually. Well done!

I like your cheeky style. fun and fun all the way.

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