a 50' party in London

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a 50' party in London
Photo Information
Copyright: buli basa (bulibasa) (30)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-26
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-13 4:05
Viewed: 173
Points: 1
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taken at a party in London, Saturday night in a club.
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HI Ion
I would have liked to have been at this party! That's a positive.
The main thing I don't like about this picture is the Guy's expression.. But I suppose what face do you make when you are getting kissed?!There is also no light in his eyes
Small niggles you have cut his head, but only just so it looks like a mistake rather then planned. The background has a distracting mirror/window, always check the background as you shoot. Their skin is a bit hot in places. The colour balance looks a bit warm.
As a picture for them to record the evening I think it is excellent. As a shot to interest anyone else,it needs to have more interest,be more dynanmic,maybe have a narrative which holds the attention.
Martin

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3287 W: 660 N: 1845] (15671)
  • [2008-05-15 2:37]
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Welcome to TL !

Your nickname sounds very rom...anian so :
Pacat ca i-ai taiat capu' tipului.


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ps,Sorry, I've switched off the points
pps.Daca vrei sa fii vazut/comentat, scrie mai multe comentarii la pozele altora

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