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Copyright: Craig Doogan (doogan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 61 W: 1 N: 34] (990)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-18
Categories: Portrait
Camera: canon 5 d, 70-200 / 2.8 L IS
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-19 5:07
Viewed: 240
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken for a student who required some shots for a final year hair and beauty folio.
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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 311 W: 0 N: 365] (1998)
  • [2009-05-19 5:49]
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Colours beautiful, nice and sharp but I think the girls look uneasy - the one on the left is looking at the camera while the other two are looking away the girl in the middle, in my opinion, the most natural looking girl is in an un natural pose mebbies if she was leaning on against the tree with her leg on the root like a step or down on her hunkers with her knee on the root may look a bit less staged. Try a shot with a bit soft focus to see if that helps. You have great potential with beautiful looking models - use it
Bri

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