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Innocent


Innocent
Photo Information
Copyright: Serkan Pulat (dove) (8)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-10-21
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: NIKON D 70, Nikkor 18-70 DX, Marumi C-PL
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/5 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-12-29 6:57
Viewed: 757
Points: 8
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What do you think about her thinking?
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Bien difficile de deviner à quoi pense cette jeune femme. En tout cas elle ne semble pas trop être perturbée par le photographe! ;) Beau portrait et belle coloration. Bravo!

Serkan
nice portrait but IMO it is too dark for me.
on the other hand the compo is good with the little tilt
Pascal

Hi Serkan, i like the way she looks.
I'll tried a workshop, hope you like it.
bye alex

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  • Pete Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 11] (270)
  • [2005-11-15 15:17]

The portrait is to dark as the lighting is poor. I use aNikon D70 as my back up camera and it has a pop up flash on the top you can use to do 'fill in flash' which, would have added the light that is missing.

I would suggest that you try different settings and lighting situations then look at the results on the computer to see what works and what does not.

I have to 'get to know' the camera I am using, how it works and how I can get the best results from it.

Good try for your first portrait.

Cześc Serkan,
Bardzo fajnie skomponowany portret, może ciut za ciemny, też podobny popełniłem.
Regards from Poland - BratAni

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