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Roundabout


Roundabout
Photo Information
Copyright: Lisa Jarvis (jarvmobile) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 48 W: 9 N: 17] (282)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-01-21
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/4, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): child [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-05-05 4:09
Viewed: 474
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Playing on a small roundabout and at teh same time watching other children play rugby
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She's very cute ^-^
Great sharpness and again textures :D
The texture of the ball-thingy, rough and flaky against the softness of her sweater and hair :)
ALso great movement, she seems quite busy doing her thing ^-^
Great photo, keep up the good work :)
Regards Fleury

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 620 W: 3 N: 531] (3606)
  • [2007-05-13 11:12]
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hello Lisa,
lovely natural portrait. I agree with Fleury about the contrast between the soft skin of this little girl (your daughter?) and the scaly, flaked metal of the roundabout. I like the tangled fly-away hair (chidren having fun don't have well combed hair as they are much too busy!)and her alertness.It works well in black & white too.
well captured
Bev

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  • fkokol Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 230 W: 0 N: 146] (1482)
  • [2007-06-05 10:52]

Beautiful portrait. Look very good in BW.
Greetings,

figen

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