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Chainbridge Inverness


Chainbridge Inverness
Photo Information
Copyright: Jon Fair (Jonela) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 374] (2727)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-11
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation, Architecture
Camera: Sony Alpha A300, Sony 18-70mm f/3.5-5.6 Zoom, 55mm CPL Polarizer
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-23 3:51
Viewed: 164
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is one of two chain bridges over the River Ness at Inverness this one is just a five minute walk from the Cathedral and true to type gives a lot as you walk over it. The movement on these types of bridges is up and down and differs in intensity depending on how many people are walking on it at one time.

Ii was obvious that the work I had done to the clouds using the burn brush was not as good as it should have been so re-did it using a copy of Photoshop 7 that I have had for a while and it seems to have sorted it out. I still used PSPX1 to re-size and upload to to TL.

I apologise to all who left critiques on the original but I felt I needed to sort out that problem.

I hope that you like it all c and c's are welcome.
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hello Jon
how are you? nice light and fine subject
good exposure
nice dof and fine colors, i like the details in this shot

tfs

regards
Manuj Mehta

lots better Jon looks like a differnt shot entirley the sky is now excellent good pp work tfs
regards bryan

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 311 W: 0 N: 365] (1998)
  • [2009-06-23 4:56]
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Hi Jon,
Sorry never seen this first time around, great shot of the bridge, good work with the burn tool. TFS
Bri

See, I just waited for the fixed version!! How did I know it was coming? hmmm, woman's intuition?
This one does look considerably better than your original post .. sky is much better. Great job to fix and repost Jonny.
The water looks metallic somehow!
Have a good day
Trudy

Hi Jon

No need to apologise to the original critiques, this is what Trek Lens is about, learning from critiques.
This looks much better, glad you were able to fix the problem.
TFS

Regards Derek

Hello Jon,

This is a much better effort and worth a repost.

The pov is excellent and leads the viewer safely across the water to enjoy the pleasures of the fine architecture and the receding trees.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1388 W: 275 N: 1876] (11642)
  • [2009-06-30 15:11]

Hello Jon.
Good point of view here.
Interesting chain bridge presented.
Well captured.
Sky is a bir over exposed. My sugestion is to use a ND grad filter in the future to help this king of images with this strong day light.
Best Regards.

Janek Kloss

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