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Photo Information
Copyright: Lukasz Jakub (alba-an-diugh) (51)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-05-02
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 40D, Canon 17-85mm f/4-5.6 IS USM, Hoya Super HMC Pro1 UV
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-17 10:05
Viewed: 214
Points: 4
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Don't know what you are trying to convey here, you don't give any notes and it just looks like a vandalised image. Are you trying to learn or are you just experimenting.

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  • NAHL Gold Star Critiquer [C: 135 W: 0 N: 0] (1200)
  • [2009-05-17 10:18]

Hi Dear Alba
Great b&w shot...very beautiful.
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Mahdi

i don't know what pp work you have done to this but whatever you have done has not worked.
the image is too dark oversharpened. the lines/scratches/hairs are very distracting.
if you refer to the tos you will see what the photographers notes should include.

you, also, put no effort into titling your images. by just giving them a number shows that even you don't know what you are trying to convey. imho!
Brian

From the site guidelines...

Descriptive Notes

Members are strongly encouraged to post descriptive notes with their photos. Notes help provide other members with information about your shot and help them to tailor their critiques to your specific needs. Shots without notes tend to receive less feedback than shots with descriptive notes.
Notes may be written in any language.


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