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loch Earn 11


loch Earn 11
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Copyright: Martin Jordan (sticks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 28 W: 24 N: 35] (2881)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-01
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon 20D, Canon 10-22
Exposure: f/8, 1/20 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): About LAKE [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-01-15 8:15
Viewed: 924
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
See notes from my other picture Loch Earn, same shoot.
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a dreamy place... the blue are absolutely beautiful. Congrats : )
Fred

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  • caner Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 1 N: 0] (116)
  • [2006-01-15 8:19]

wow!
This is a spectacular photograph.
Excelent idea and fine effect.
I really loved this photograph.
Well done!

Lovely dreamy/mystic atmosphere with good foreground lead in. I believe the horizon slopes to the left.
7.5/10 earns you a 1point gong
Barry

I would love to love this one but I can't.
Tilt to the left.
Dull - maybe you wanted the ambience but it's dull.
the composition leaves an almost 50/50split horizon, with nothing of great interest in the sky but the water holds MUCH more interest. Suggest a crop to chop the sky in favour of the water/stones therein. Brighten, more contrast, max saturation, crop to place the posts in a stronger visual position. Sharpen more, black frame.
It does not end up as a 'different' photograph, as it remains totally atmospheric as you intended but comes out as a much more interesting image.
There, I say what I see. Would you like a good crit or something like 'Wow great shot bye'? Exploding packages to the usual address.

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  • lukdm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 381 W: 3 N: 21] (1350)
  • [2006-01-15 14:07]

very nice view and shot martin

Very nice shot Martin.
All the picture that taken with digital camera I think their contrast are low and we should increase it.

Mani.

You know - I love landscapes, really I do. And I love this image because it is a true reflection - every sense - of the location.

Of course it's technically brilliant - but more important to me is that I relate to the location - it makes me want to go there - I can sense it from this image.

I guess, what I mean in summary, is that it's not contrived or saccharin.

Best wishes, Simon

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 75 N: 902] (7908)
  • [2006-01-16 11:43]

Dreamy capture & place.
mitra

I do really like this series. Scrolling it up and down I think I agree with Kit. Also the foreground being brown and everything else blue and white is a bit jaring, perhaps toning the whole thing with blue might work.
Chris

Actually i have just tried it and the toning idea is rubbish....move along nothing to see here.

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2006-01-20 12:13]

HELLO MARTIN.
What a wonderful picture. The tones of it are amazing, I enjot the deep blues which create a mystical mood. You handle perfectly with the textures.
Congratulations.
Luci

Hi Martin.

Strolled onto your page and saw this. A stunner...envy mode full on. Well done.

SF.

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  • Biero Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 259 W: 41 N: 244] (3381)
  • [2006-04-10 9:53]

Bravo Martin,

Bienvenu sur TL,
J'aime beaucoup ta photo de paysage, quel spectacle.
Merci de partager.
Pierre
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Voilą finalement les points!... j'avais confondu "critique" et "comment"

Like it. Its a great picture.

Hi Martin,

Wow! excellent mood shot. You may try tilting the image a few degrees to the right to level the horizon.

Regards,

Allan

Hi there!
A wonderfully dramatic, atmospheric shot. Amazing colours and use of the light, and great composition too. Well done and TFS!

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