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waiting in anticipation


waiting in anticipation
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Copyright: bryan johnstone (luckybry) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 646 W: 32 N: 845] (6309)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-19
Categories: Event
Camera: Nikon D40X, AF-S DX Nikkor 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6G ED II
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): borders ferstivals and common ridings [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-06-21 9:13
Viewed: 285
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
as last week was Selkirk,s big weekend this week was another border towns festival weekend it was the Beltane festival in Peebles i was not able to go on saturday due to work but manged up on friday night for the big fancy dress parade some shots to follow thought i would try a crowd scene waiting for the parade to start, the whole street was lined with poeple
resized and uploaded ty for looking ps hope kilted doesn,t get homesick
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Certainly a lot of people Bryan and a lot of colour. I hope you dont miund but I have prepared a ws Tell me what you think.

LuckyB: Looking forward to the upcoming shots!!

JoeGOFF, Louisville, KY

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 310 W: 0 N: 361] (1972)
  • [2009-06-22 4:25]
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Hi Bryan, I have came back to this image a couple of times as I did not know what to write, in all honesty I thought you could have done far better but it has dawned on me that as a photograph it follows all the right rules, rule of thirds, leading lines DoF etc. all great, what it lacks is a main image to focus on and that is what you have shown - no main image, so go on then, show us what these people were waiting for in anticipation....TFS
Bri

Hi Bryan

Good use of diminishing linear perspective & vanishing point. The boy in the red at left, breaking the barrier, caught my eye here. I would burn in the oe bg. Tfs!

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 454 W: 0 N: 809] (4149)
  • [2009-06-22 8:13]
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Hi Bryan !
Interesting presentation of the images.
Nice presentation and playback, congratulations.
Have a nice week,
Adrian

Woah! hahaha! This has brightened my day, Bryan - thanks indeed for posting this! For me, the technicals don't really matter here - photography is about catching moments, preserving them and also about awakening old memories and emotions. For me, you've done that in shedloads with this shot.

For many years as a nipper I took part in the Beltane Parade. Dressed as a toy soldier, a bumble bee, a Chinaman and goodness knows what else. Homesick? Yah, maybe a bit :-)

You've caught a good moment here, the wide empty streets with the crowds waiting for the parade and the wee kid on the left peering out to see what's coming. Like this a lot, Bryan - many thanks indeed for posting this!

Hi Bryan,
Nice interesting photo and with a different view. Linear effect with no central disturbance drawing the eye to the clock tower.Sky needed a bit of diffusion otherwise great photo and TFS.
erwin.....

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