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wheres the rest gone


wheres the rest gone
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Copyright: bryan johnstone (luckybry) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 644 W: 32 N: 843] (6289)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-24
Categories: Humorous, Nature
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-06-26 6:35
Viewed: 156
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this was part of the family of swans i uploaded yesterday he was a little to the side of the rest so i took a shot of him by himself
shot in raw resized and uploaded ty for looking
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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 452 W: 0 N: 802] (4109)
  • [2009-06-26 6:41]

Hi Bryan !

Nice catch.
Very well made and played.
Congratulations my most warm.
Good day,
Adrian

Hi Bryan,

I really like this really good shot the details are great one of your best to date well done my friend.

Regards
Jon

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 308 W: 0 N: 353] (1928)
  • [2009-06-26 8:42]

Hi Bryan,
Great shot but I think I would have not croped in so close, it looks like you have a great reflection there cut away. Hope you are well. TFS
Bri

Cute shot and caption. A little soft focussed Bryan as bri said you would have got the reflection and the shot would probably have been a lottle sharper.There also appears to be a little dust in the bottom right. I like the look of the water. It looks so close. Nice job
warm regards
David

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4181 W: 407 N: 6449] (41275)
  • [2009-06-27 1:25]

Hi bryan

Here, I would crop on the right, so that the cygnet is positioned on the 1/3 axis, & is looking towards the 2/3 remaining at left. Good backlighting shot, with superb shadow detail & exposure. Tfs!

Hi Bryan
A great of this duck
The shallow DOF is really amazing
But what is more interesting is the forms of small water waves which has excellent detail due to your point of focus, with a dark silver tone! Superb freezing.
Best Wishes
Alireza

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  • elma (14)
  • [2009-06-28 5:30]

Nice pic Bro good composition well done

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 848 W: 64 N: 1941] (13220)
  • [2009-06-29 5:56]

Hi Bryan,
I absolutely love baby swans and this one is beautiful. Excellent lighting and colors. The shadows of the waves are well captured also. TFS Julie

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