take off enduro no3

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• chrisJ (45660)
• [2009-07-29 6:07]
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Hi bryan

The diagonal line & axis of the bike provide goiod dynamism. Excellent sharpness & panning with good framing & dof. I'd try to include all of the front wheel. Tfs!

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• teamill (6220)
• [2009-07-29 6:14]
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Hi neighbor!
Good job on this one Bryan. Not easy to capture those guys as they zip past you! You've done a good job of getting him quite sharp .. with a little motion blur on the tires. It would have been good as Chris said, to include the whole tire, and also to leave a little space ahead of him to ride into .. but hey, that's just being picky ..you did good to capture him.
Trudy :)

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• Jonela (2918)
• [2009-07-29 7:35]
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Hi Bryan,

I have to admit it this is a much better shot than mine grr the only thing I can pick up it the camera was the D90 not D40X. You have caught the jump well the details are good would have suited a lower pov though but well done.

Regards
Jon

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• bri (3600)
• [2009-07-29 8:45]
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Hi Bryan,
Great shot with both wheels off the ground, I would be inclined to have taken the shot with a lot more space around so the action could be croped and placed in the frame where you like, I know this is not always possible and using a lower PoV on this particular shot would mean the post and tape being right in the way. Grea action shot though - did you get touchdown?.
Bri

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• nildosco (782)
• [2009-07-29 15:22]
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Hello Bryan,

Nice moment and pov. But the shutterspeed was a little too high. So in my opinion there`s a tiny bit of lack of dynamics in this picture.
But nevertheless that`s personal. Keep posting that kind of pics.
Grtzz. Nildo

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• Sharpshooter (6922)
• [2009-07-29 23:11]
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Hi Bryan,
This is more like it! Good job with this one. I would however (I know what you're thinking, lol) leave more space to the left for the guy to 'move into' as at the moment he doesn't look quite right, especially with part of the front wheel cut off. I do like the way you've frozen him in the air though, the details look good here. Certainly deserves 2-points.

TFS,
Scott.

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• hifimusicdai (6323)
• [2009-07-30 13:52]

Good colours and definition. I would agree with those who comment re space around the ridewr especially in front but good job.
warm regards
David

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• MLINES (8765)
• [2009-08-01 17:00]

Hi Bryan, Good action shot of this off-road biker. Well frozen mid air. Only improvement may be to include a little more space ahead of the fron wheel, but it is still avery good sports photo. TFS. Murray.

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• jimkilgallon (638)
• [2009-08-05 1:41]

Hi Bryan
Good action shot, unlucky you cropped the bike but I would say these action shots are very hard to pull off. Shutter was high but however the details stand out well here.
Regards
Jim