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lets hide from mum


lets hide from mum
Photo Information
Copyright: bryan johnstone (luckybry) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 666 W: 32 N: 882] (6648)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08
Categories: Humorous, Nature
Camera: Nikon D90, AF-S DX Nikkor 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6G ED II, 52 mm Hoya Circular Polarizer
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-10 5:34
Viewed: 133
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
saw this family outing when up at Lindean loch near Selkirkin the scotish borderlands it was like the young ones were trying to play hide and seek thought it would be a ok shot
shot in Raw resized not much pp work done at all ty for looking
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To RSK: no needluckybry 2 08-11 08:58
To bri: tyluckybry 1 08-11 00:25
To Farukmey: tyluckybry 1 08-10 11:22
To cunejo200: tyluckybry 1 08-10 11:22
To chrisJ: tyluckybry 1 08-10 06:41
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Hi Bryan,

This is a very nice family shot it is nice to see so many young at one time the colours are very good a tad to much saturation though imo.

Regards
Jon

Hi Bryan

I like the repetition & opposing angles of the swans & cygnets. Good use of a shallow dof although the colour balance is not quite right. Perhaps add a little more cyan? The midtones seem yellow green, & the shadows appear blue magenta. Polar opposites. So perhaps play around with the hue instead, in pp? Tfs!

Hello Bryan,
I dream about taking this type of nature scene. Can't complain about the compo as it looks great. Fascinating to see the fowls in between grass blades. I share Chris' opinion re: the colors but then again I had thought that an HDR software was applied. I would do a WS but I am sneaking this c/c at work. Well done and regards.
Danilo

Hello Bryan

very well captured.
Beautiful natural composition.
Regards

Faruk

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 345 W: 0 N: 414] (2222)
  • [2009-08-10 15:27]
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Hi Bryan,
Good shooting, nice to see so many cygnets together, may be a little oe in the light areas but good catch al the same. Cheers
Bri

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 511 W: 131 N: 965] (7050)
  • [2009-08-10 17:37]
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Hi Bryan,

sorry my friend but I'm not too keen on this one,may I ask what PP work you did?The main swan is OE & the yellow tinge on it's neck is also troubling. The subject matter is terrific, with the whole swan family in & out of the grasses, as is the composition great ,but it lacks details & the colours don't appear natural. IMHO

regards

Ron

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