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The rough with the smooth


The rough with the smooth
Photo Information
Copyright: Jon Fair (Jonela) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 378 W: 2 N: 379] (2779)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-09
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: Sony Alpha A300, Sony 18-70mm f/3.5-5.6 Zoom, 55mm CPL Polarizer
Exposure: f/16, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-07 2:17
Viewed: 135
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is another from my archives taken near the end of a day out with derona and the first day I had used the tobacco filter with any effect. This is the Tweed at Melrose and I liked the way the river had a straight line across it where the rapids stopped and calmer water started.

I added a border re-sized and sharpened.

All c and c's are welcome.

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Hello,
Magnificent shot!
Lovely view! Great composition of the photo.
Excellent presentation.
TFS

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1358 W: 0 N: 2685] (21313)
  • [2009-09-07 4:43]

Hello,

Génaile captage a ras l'eau, quel effet, les rapides et le calme, ce rouge de l'eau est superbe, très belle image.

bravo et amitié

Nicou

Nice Jon. I like the depth of the scene with the rock out front - maybe a little dark on the rock though. I like the sunflares in the sky ... often people clone them out, but I like them.
The frame .. I'm a fan of a simple white frame, but I find that if you start with a very skinny black frame inside of your white frame, the light/white areas don't get lost in the frame ... like in the top left corner here. It just seems to set the photo off better... just my humble opinion of course :)
Trudy

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 393 W: 1 N: 468] (2489)
  • [2009-09-07 12:12]
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Hi Jon,
Great shot of the Tweed, nice low PoV which probably adds to the line between rough and smooth. Great shot. Cheers
Bri

Helo Jon,
Very beautiful shot. Wonderful composition and nice lights. Well done.
Best wishes,
Achim

Hi Jon,

Beautiful scene capture from an atractive low POV with nice composition.
TFS and cheers,

Bayram

Hello Jon,
great effect the birth od rapids, very detailed and pleasant contrast between dark water on the right and reflections on the left.
Ciao, Elena

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