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falls of Talla water


falls of Talla water
Photo Information
Copyright: bryan johnstone (luckybry) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 684 W: 32 N: 899] (6844)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-12
Categories: Nature, Experimental
Camera: Nikon D90, AF-S DX Nikkor 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6G ED II, 52 mm Hoya Circular Polarizer
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-15 3:21
Viewed: 144
Points: 14
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my first attemp at a collage took thes shots when out with Jonela and Don last sunday went to in my opinon one of the best areas for shots in the borders took loads of shots and thought id try a collage of the waterfalls from the talla burn that runs down the hills to the resorvior of Talla Water all were shot in raw and resized i have a lot to learn about collages so appreciate any feedback and tips ty for looking

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Hi bryan

A nice sextette of waterfall images, with each complimenting the others. Good sharpness, colour & framing. Superb motion blur in most. I think #5 is the best. Tfs!

Hello Bryan,
I am clueless with regard to collage production and/or assembly. You appear to have experimented on various exposure settings based on the degrees of water silkiness. I do like the two top left, the bottom right may benefit from HDR processing. I am also fascinated by waterfall images. Experience tells me that spot metering on the water coupled with a slow shutter speed will almost always result in a smooth waterfall composition - but you would need a tripod for this. Thanks for showing this as it inspires me to dig my waterfall pictures and critique myself. Best regards.
Danilo

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  • Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 378 W: 2 N: 379] (2779)
  • [2009-10-15 15:15]

Hi Bryan,

I have never tried to do a collage but you have done well with this one IMHO although the large section on the right seems to be a tad over saturated well done.

Regards
Jon

My own thught on collages are that unless the subject is highly interesting then it is good to contrasting pictures ie similar theme but different subjects Photography is very much something of personal taste and so we are allowed different opinions My favorite shot is the centre one at the top. The larger shot seems to be blurred and a little oe The alignment of the shots also seems to be a little off. I use the grid under PSPPXI to ensure correct alignment - it can be found under view at the top. Sorry If I sound over critical but I know you appreciate honesty
warm regards
David

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  • roges Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 557 W: 0 N: 1061] (5202)
  • [2009-10-16 7:32]

Hi Bryan,

A beautiful collage in different colors.
Excellent color with some beautiful details.
My warm congratulations on your first attempt. We expect other attempts. First step was already done.
Have a good day,
Adrian

Hello Bryan,
A beautiful collage of these waterfalls with great colors, sharpness & details. Great POV & composition.
Best regards Siegfried

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 389 W: 1 N: 463] (2471)
  • [2009-10-16 12:42]
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Hi Bryan,
All good shots in there own right, the R/H one is a little fuzzy and I think a different style of font would have looked better on the presentation. All in all a nice montage. TFS
Bri

Salam Bryan

Nice collectin of autumnal waterfalls with great colors
In my opinion each shot has the potential for individual upload

Best wishes, Alireza

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