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my perfect model model
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Copyright: bryan johnstone (luckybry) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 677 W: 32 N: 893] (6739)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-11-08
Categories: Humorous, Experimental, Macro
Camera: Nikon D90, AF-S DX Nikkor 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6G ED II
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-11-09 2:52
Viewed: 96
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just messing about with some different ideas yesterday at home got a doll from my wifes collection sat on top of my laptop and put a blackbook cover behind it shot in raw on portrait mode very experimental shot
ty for looking and comments will be taken on board

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Hi Bryan,

I am very worried about your sanity playing wi dolls at your age you should be ashamed lol.
I am not sure what you wanted to achieve by shooting this as it appears to as more of a snapshot than anything else imho. As a pure experiment it works so is worth a smilley.

Regards
Jon

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 362 W: 0 N: 435] (2333)
  • [2009-11-09 11:28]

Hi Bryan,
Nice experiment, it looks like you have missed a bit of rubbing out or cloning on the right side next to the arm, If you had lightened the hair a bit to give a bit more contrast against the black background, as it is the hair is lost and it looks like one of my old girlfriends! the cartoon bird is cut in nice - good for an experiment but now we will expect better. TFS
Bri

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