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three in one


three in one
Photo Information
Copyright: bryan johnstone (luckybry) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 111 W: 0 N: 58] (874)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-01
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/4000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Red, white and blue - Three colours in harmony., Three of A Kind – Second Chapter [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-05 14:10
Viewed: 241
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
used three pictures of my wife Shiona a put into one and tried the fish eye lens on psp also framed and croped
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You skillfully placed her perfectly Bryan in different positions and expressions. Perfect for the theme and need more commendation.

Excellent in all aspect my friend.

My ability to give points will resume next month. That's why it indicated in comment mode only.

Thank you for your support and kind words. I appreciated it.

Dennis

Hello Bryan,
Pretty cool idea here ,sure like the effect of the fisheye in general photography , on the other hand here in your composition it has brought about a definitive distortion of your subject (your wife appears to grow bigger from left to right...i do not think she would appreciate ...lol ) and that might have been more impactful using a 50mn focal but i still find your composition interesting experimentally speaking ,
Regards,
Carol

Hi Bryan,
Nice to meet your wife and great PP work in putting the three shots together, In My Opinion I don't like the fisheye effect, I think it spoils the effect of your previous PP work but that could be me as I am not a great fan of fisheye shots.
Good origional theme entry though.
Regards Andy

Good artistic shot Bryan. Fish-eye lenses give some really weird images, but I reckon you've pulled it off just right.

Cheers
HM

hi bryan,

interesting experiment...the two outer pictures look much the same, perhaps three different would look better...

good colours and good detail, good control of the bright conditions...

nice1...keep em coming..

cheers...007

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 780 W: 0 N: 1191] (4966)
  • [2008-07-08 5:43]
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HI Bryan
I am not a fan of fisheye unless its a fantasty of sort.
You did a great job of placing your wife but the distortion shows the left as very skinny while the right looks overweight, its a good thing the original wife is in the center.
Nevertheless you did a great job.
Dot

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