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Beach huts


Beach huts
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Copyright: John Winder (RhythmThief) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 193 W: 5 N: 216] (1735)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-25
Categories: Experimental
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ7
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-06 0:56
Viewed: 366
Points: 17
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Good morning everyone.
This was taken at Llanbedroc on the Lleyn Peninsula in North Wales. I was there to visit an art exhibition nearby and aftewards I and my girlfriend walked down to the beach. All the beach huts were lined up in the car park and looked to have been freshly painted; I thought it looked like a classic photo, my girlfriend thought I was daft ;-). The only thing I'm not happy about is the amount of 'dead space' in the left foreground, but I've left it as it was for your comments, favourable or otherwise.
I haven't done any pp work on this, but I was playing with Photoshop last night and made a couple of versions with different brush effects, which I rather like. But on balance, this is my favourite one.
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Nice color and composite .. For me Great

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  • Ruut Gold Star Critiquer [C: 254 W: 8 N: 33] (1277)
  • [2007-08-06 1:48]
  • [+]

Hello John,
The beach huts and their colours are certainly a good subject for a picture.It catched my eye. I understand your selfcritic about the foreground, but you know it doesn't border me at all. The huts are the eyecatchers for me. I thinkyou can be satisfied by the result!
Ruut

Hi John

Great shot, well seen and captured. Love the colours and POV

TFS regards Helen

Hi Bro,

I think this is one of my favorites of yours to date (along with the aleins on the beach) Good perspective and it draws the eye away from any neg space you have.

Hello John ,
Great idea, well-seen and well-presented ,compo ,DOF
tfs

Petar

Superbe cette alignement de couleur bien démontré par les cabines de chnages. Couleurs vives et et pastel. Image nette et précise, j'aime ce style.. bravo.. Réal.

Hi John,
Very nice formation, good colors and repetition of subject. Well seen.
Regards,
Iris

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3271 W: 267 N: 7745] (33032)
  • [2007-11-21 2:00]

I like this composition John, The beach huts are well lined up and the colours are very eye-catching.
BRAVO
Janice

Hi John

I love the colours and composition of this photo.

But I wonder what it would look like if you cropped out the first beach hut?

Just a thought.

Thanks
Terri

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