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Grass in the sun


Grass in the sun
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Copyright: John Winder (RhythmThief) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 193 W: 5 N: 216] (1735)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-02-17
Categories: Mood
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ7
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/160 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-14 1:08
Viewed: 314
Points: 5
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Hello everyone,
This was taken near Bontddu on the Mawddach Estuary in North Wales. I like the effect of the sun shining through the grass in the middle of the shot. I think there might be a little too much space in the foreground but I'd like to know what you think. Cheers, John.

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Hi John,

I like the idea but think the sky is a bit washed out, see if you can get a ND grad filter or polariser that should stop it happening in future. Also I think making a longer thinner crop to highlight the grass better might be a good idea. I would do a workshop if i knew how!

Cheers

Tom

John, I agree with Tom, the sky is washed out, also too much dark in the foreground. I think this would be difficult to correct in PS. Still, all part of the learning curve. Cheers, Dad

Hi John

Yip I agree a touch OE on the sky.. very difficult circumstances to shoot in. I like the sun shining through the grass and also the glimpse of water.


Nicely seen

TFS regards Helen

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