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Geometry
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Copyright: John Winder (RhythmThief) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 193 W: 5 N: 216] (1735)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-21
Categories: Architecture, Abstract
Camera: Nikon D200., Nikkor 18-55 f/3.5-5.6 G, Hoya 52 mm Skylight
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/1000 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-10-26 14:47
Viewed: 465
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello everyone,
Another shot from the trip to Cardiff last Sunday. I took this while sitting having a coffee in a small shopping arcade off Castle Street. It's nothing special, but I like the patterns made by the ironwork and the colour of the sky through the glass.

Contrast increased slightly
Cropped
Resized for upload

Another Friday and I haven't managed to take a Freaky shot for the weekly theme ... oh well, maybe next week!
Cheers, John.

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To bluepianowaits: GeometryRhythmThief 1 10-27 04:16
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Hi John,

Not sure about this one, the perspective is good, if I where you I would have cropped off the back wall so the roof did not end. Also the lighting seems wrong to me, it is all one sided, I know there is not alot to be done about that apart from retrning at a differnt time of day/year. I find the lanterns a bit distracting particularly the two on the left that are not working the one furthest back could have been cropped out with that rear wall. Sorry I must have woken up in a slightly bad mood this morning.

Cheers
Tom

Hello John! Very good perspective. Good POV. Original geometry. Very good picture. Well done.

Hi John, I think I would have been tempted to crop it in to just the geometric patterns of the roof structure, or better still to use a zoom to do it, I tend to agree with Tom about the back wall and sides being distracting. Definitely potential though with the geometry theme! Cheers, Dad

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