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Wendy
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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Dragan Ancevski (ancevski) (318) |
| Genre: People |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2005-08-01 |
| Categories: Event |
| Camera: Fuji Finepix E510 |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2006-06-29 6:22 |
| Viewed: 391 |
| Points: 1 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
I took this photo on the European Scout Jamboree "EuroJam" which was held in Hylands Park, near to Chelmsford.
There were gathered about 5000 scouts from Europe and the world. This is just one of them :) |
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Hi Dragan
A pleasant face, but if you want a critique, there are a few things that could have been better.
The quality isn't great, there seems to be a lot of pixellation or noise.
DOF is too deep - the background is much sharper than it should be, and that ends up being distracting.
And I'm a little uneasy about Wendy's expression, she doesn't look relaxed or happy, just tense.
Good points: your colours and light are good, and the composition is fine for this kind of portrait. Keep trying and sorry this wasn't more glowing, I believe honest critiques are the best way to grow.
regards
Rew
Dragan.
Beautiful and colourful picture, but to match work with your photoshop. Is not 100% a realistic girl.
Greatings
Aloys
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Nice One, Good Colours and Wendy has Nice Eyes. Really Good Portrait.
Best Wishes.
MikeD