<< Previous Next >>

On the way down


On the way down
Photo Information
Copyright: Brian Tempest (penzance) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 0 N: 8] (1791)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-11-17
Categories: Action
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-11-18 8:05
Viewed: 471
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
None
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
None
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Hello Brian.

Excellent picture, nice composition.

Regards.

bonjour,
très belle photographie : le mouvement de la vague qui s'enroule sur le surfeur est fort
TFS

Hi Brian,
Cool man, very nice portrait and good POV, love to see detail and action from model. how u do that ? with highspeed ?

Haldian

Excellent composition Brian,
Great action captured.

Well done.
Regards, Daniel

Great colours and movement sensation in this action shot.
Well done!!
Regards.
Jacobo

Great Shot, you can almost feel the weightof that wave. Perfect colouring and contrast.
Good Work. The Frame adds the final touch.
MikeD

Very nice shot. I like the wind in the waves. Great composition. Well done. Ed

  • Great 
  • suzley Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 914 W: 86 N: 718] (6786)
  • [2006-11-18 12:18]

Hi Brain.

Great capture with a well presented frame, adds so much, welldone.

Stv

  • Great 
  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-11-18 13:14]

Good capture, class sporting moment. But the scene deserves no frame, especially not the heavy, commemorative-like one you've used here. It suffocates the scene.

A.

Nice composition Brian, good action shot. Regards Mark

  • Great 
  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1477 W: 10 N: 738] (10767)
  • [2006-11-18 20:23]

Hi Brian,
Very nice action photo. Bit of California in Cornwall?
Sunil

Hello Brian !

Cool wave and colors . I like the light going through the breaking wave.

May I suggest you to crop the right and left borders, keeping only the top and bottom. This way , you will be able to post a larger view of our surfer , and we will be able to enjoy more the photo.

OK I just worked a little WS. Let me know what you think .
Cheers!
Robert

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF