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Autumn River


Autumn River
Photo Information
Copyright: Craig Doogan (doogan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 1 N: 35] (1018)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-01
Categories: Nature
Camera: canon 350d, 17-40mm/f4L
Exposure: f/22, 15 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): What i Like [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-11-02 16:08
Viewed: 1092
Favorites: 4 [view]
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken during a stroll through the Den at Alyth
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Hi Craig

I really like this shot. I love long exposures with water and leaves. The colors are strong and the composition excellent. I did feel the shot was a bit soft and not as sharp as it could be. I posted a workshop if you are so interested. Have a good weekend!

A very pleasant view Craig, well composed with beautiful colours. However the image is a little soft (I don't mean the water). May I suggest a final pre-post sharpening using (in Adobe PS or Elements) the high pass filter. Create a duplicate layer then filters>other>HPF and set a radius of 0.3. Click "normal" and opt for blend mode Vivid light @ 100% opacity. Click the "eye" icon on and off to see the before and after effect (but leave it on to re-compress for the web).

Hi Craig
Lovely colours and composition
Regards Pez

Great composition, lovely colours and a great PoV. I like this! The softness suits it, in my view.
Cheers, John.

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  • soda Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 174 W: 67 N: 149] (2631)
  • [2007-11-02 18:44]

Hi Craig,
Wow! What a wonderful place! It's very relaxing to look at.
Great natural colours and composition.
Well done and thanks for sharing.
Lise

I like the water effects in contrast to the still fallen leaves. I'd like to see a real autumn someday and I'm hoping its just like this. :)

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1477 W: 10 N: 738] (10767)
  • [2007-11-02 20:18]

Hi Craig,
Nice Autumn scene. I would have liked to see more of the forest in the BG.
Sunil

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 519 W: 133 N: 973] (7147)
  • [2007-11-02 20:25]

Hi Craig,nice angle you took for this image,nice warm mood about it,you really captured the colors here.TFS

Ron

I love this photo - beautiful colours and effective exposure length. Perfect composition and low point of view. I really like the way the leaves are decorating the rocks in the river and the silky appearance of the water.

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  • c3101 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 161 W: 0 N: 94] (1246)
  • [2007-11-03 0:21]

What a beautiful scene Craig.

The movement in the water adds a touch to the photo otherwise lacking.
Nice composition, nice colours.

Well done.

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2646 W: 1 N: 1268] (15457)
  • [2007-11-03 1:25]

Hola Craig,
preciosos efectos y sensacional pov,
bonitos colores de otoño,
buen trabajo,
saludos

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  • tyro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 220 W: 79 N: 828] (3929)
  • [2007-11-03 4:57]

Hello, Craig.

I like this picture a lot. The colours are superbly autumnal and I also like the effect of a slow shutter-speed on the flow of the water - sometimes that can be a bit overdone, but not in this case.

However, I think the workshop done by Mike Ryan has helped it a great deal as, I am sure, would the advice given by Vic Chapman. That just puts the icing on the cake!

Excellent!

Kind Regards,

John.

Hi Craig,
Absolutely splendid picture. The long exposure and your aperture of F/22 have given you spectacular results !

Well done !
Best regards, Daniel.

Hi Craig,
Quietness, peace... A relaxing view... TFS, Marta

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1313 W: 96 N: 1024] (8498)
  • [2007-11-11 14:31]

Hi Craig. A very picturesque part of this woodland well captured and presented. The leaves on the boulders are very attractive. Good water flow. TFS. Murray.

Hi Craig,

Good work, like your POV and the capture of the colours.... TFS

Fara

Hi Craig

An excellent composition with such good colours and texture especially the touch on the flow of the stream has given it a fantastic look.

Hope to see more of each other.

Bye
mk subba

Hello Craig!
I market it as my favourite photo.Perfectly composed shot!
Congrats!
Cheers.
Cezar

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  • fredi (38)
  • [2007-12-09 12:47]

hi
have to join the others who commented it!
i like the colour tone and the water with the long exposure time!
fredi

Hi Craig,
Amazing DOF, beautiful colors and fabulous sharpness and detail.
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes
Merry Christmas

Amazing photo. I can never get enough of beautiful woodsy foliage photos. I love the softness of the flowing stream, the arrangement of the rocks, the colors both in the foreground and background, and the moss covered rocks and branches throughout the photo. In scenes like this, nature itself is beautiful -- but as a photographer, you did an amazing job of creating even more beauty by finding an original and artistic way of capturing the beauty you found here. Wonderful shot. Added to my favorites.

foto suberba, con un'altissima qualità. Paesaggio magnifico ed ottima composizione. Complimenti!
L.

This is a beautiful image. Very tranquil. TFS :-)

You make me want to be there. Great Job. Bill

Hello Craig.

Excellent picture, nice composition and colors.

Regards.
Jose Luis.

Great job with the exposure. Love the colours and tranquil feel of this image!
Bravo! *** Ursula ***

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  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1082 W: 436 N: 421] (13350)
  • [2008-02-19 6:06]

Hi Craig
beautiful place, stopped water appeals to me, I am greeting.
TFS
Cheers
Anna

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  • k-2 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 632 W: 13 N: 491] (3541)
  • [2008-03-09 14:42]

The FG sharpness and interest is great.
The smooth water adds to the mood. TFS. K2

Hi Craig ,
AMAZING colours.
great composition.

Regards
Saeed

Beautiful autum colours.

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