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Rebecca 1


Rebecca 1
Photo Information
Copyright: Martin Jordan (sticks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 28 W: 24 N: 38] (2645)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-28
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, 85mm f/1.2 L
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-09 13:53
Viewed: 538
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 27
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another shot of Rebecca. I hope its not too obvious.
Shot with one softbox. Very simple.
Martin
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Wow!!!
Fantastic Martin. And I love the picture too... ;-)
Very good light, excellent sharpness and pleasant crop.
Fantastic model and her pose.
Real pleasure for eyes.
TFS
Wojciech

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  • boonie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1312 W: 52 N: 1372] (6780)
  • [2008-06-09 14:54]

Hi Martin
The technical aspect of this image are outstanding. Color saturation, exposure, composition and well the elements - her eyes, skin tone and expression simply top notch.

Dan

perfect lighting Martin!

bravo

Marco

PS I didnt noticed at first glance that you PP so hardly the BG, that's a pity!!

Hi Martin,

Lovely detail, super colour and gorgeous model.

Douglas

I like it in almost every respect. Lovely rich lighting and deep saturation, and my kind of catchlights in her eyes, I love that soft marble kind of effect. Rich skin colour and of course the open jacket and bountiful cleavage add sensuality to the shot and bring it gracefully into the 'glamour' category.

I'm just not entirely sure about the lopped-off upper part of her head? Just makes the shot feel a little claustrophobic - I suspect if I had posted a shot with that composition you'd be scolding me for it ... ?

Rew

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 945 W: 76 N: 432] (7581)
  • [2008-06-09 20:37]

great shot nice light
TFS

Nice model, Focus is on the eyes or very close to them. Nice body color, nice tones. WB is pretty up to it. It's very popular these days to cut the top of the head but to my preferences, I always prefer to see the entire head. Only downside on this shot is really the PS work. Lots of dots on the BG. Around her head, hands, top of HER left shoulder (black spot)

Beside that, very nice! Congrats! Very well done!

very good shot, nice pose very good light

cris(",)

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 325 W: 14 N: 1070] (6318)
  • [2008-06-09 22:47]

Woooow Martin!
Superb portrait.
Superb model!
Greetings from Netherland,
Adri

It's not too obvious. It's fantastic. Light and skin tones match perfectly with the composition (even it's simple for you). The red jacket works great with her style. Keep posting more shots. I like it

Love the light and the honest skin textures of this shot

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1087 W: 0 N: 904] (9182)
  • [2008-06-10 10:49]

A piece of art in all respect........
jan

Splendid shot Martin,
Splendid colours, splendid lighting, splendid model
congratulations,
friendly,
Pat

thanks for sharing Martin, another excellent shot, nevertheless one of your best. Only one small thing, the eyes, have they been processed at all? they look a bit unnatural. I know I've asked this question for a previous shot as well and you said no.

cheers

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