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Rebecca 3


Rebecca 3
Photo Information
Copyright: Martin Jordan (sticks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 28 W: 24 N: 38] (2645)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-02
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, 85mm f/1.2 L
Exposure: f/1.2, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Beautiful Portraits, World Portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-06-11 10:49
Viewed: 437
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another Shot of Becky. Taken with natural light, using a large aperture to get a narrow dof.
Martin
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brilliant, I love natural light and I know how dificult it to get it right. Becky helps of course with the hair color and skin tone which are lovely.

thanks for sharing
cheers

Hi Martin,

This works a treat, lovely clarity and the shallow dof is spot on and your model is gorgeous.

Douglas

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  • kross1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 485 W: 11 N: 756] (3008)
  • [2008-06-11 11:15]

Martin,
I like this portrait. The light is perfect and the soft tones are wonderful. Excellent dof here. You are lucky to work with such a beautiful model. Very nicely done.
Regards,
Kevin

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  • leeloo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 258 W: 0 N: 11] (2465)
  • [2008-06-11 11:21]

Dear Martin Jordan!
Amazing Becky!
Beautiful girl.
Fantastic eyes.
Nice face.
Wonderful light and sharp.
Good portrait.
TFS!

Hi Martin,
I think this is the best shot of Becky, she has the most gorgeous brown eyes, and fantastic complection. She is a natural beauty and you have captured her so well.
Great use of natural light.
TFS
Jane

what can i say more i don't no,looks like a covergirl for a magazine

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 325 W: 14 N: 1070] (6318)
  • [2008-06-11 13:01]

Hi Martin,
Only one thing: G R E A T !
Greetings from Netherland,
Adri

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 677 W: 21 N: 643] (6182)
  • [2008-06-11 13:58]

ciao martin.....grande composizione...ottimo il pov...bellissimo lavoro...complimenti....grande soggetto....
lele

Nice fashion shot and for the best : with natural light.

Starting to recognise that "trademark" head-crop ...

Excellent shot in every other respect, good light and terrific bokeh.

Rew

MArtin


bellisimo enigmatico unico y enfoque bien logrado

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  • wilth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 354 W: 44 N: 467] (1733)
  • [2008-06-11 20:28]

I love natural lighting, and this is a fine example of why. It's very effective in bringing out the natural beauty of the skin and complexion, assuming it's there, and has such a nice warm feeling to it.
You've used the DoF to your, and the subjects, advantage here as well.
Beautiful image very well done and presented.
Thanks for the view,
Wilt

Bonjour Martin,
very precise focus. It's not an easy task at 1.2. At first, I found the portrait very nice so I looked at the specs. You have the lens! But that doesn't make it all. The model's expression is right on, the hair is perfectly placed and what about the hands!... Absolutly perfect compo. Congratulations!

Hello Martin,
Very nice portrait shot.beautiful skin tones color and light here.Nice DOF too.Great done!

Still confuse about your lens F/2.8 and your exposure F/1.2 here..Just wondering.

CM

Hello martin

Wonderfull portrait, excellent light composition and dof.

TFS

Olivier

Hi Martin,
I'm really impressed with your gallery. This one in particular, it's fresh, clean and has a real warmth to it. Fantastic DOF. This is also a great example of good use of natural light.
Regards, Kath

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  • Nesa Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 19 N: 18] (221)
  • [2008-08-26 20:02]

nice shot, pretty girl.
keep on.
hope to se more.

Nenad.

Superb portrait, really like the model's classical pose and the DOF here. Well done.

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1195 W: 90 N: 958] (6810)
  • [2008-10-31 21:05]

Hi Martin, A beautiful model and a very fine portrait. The eyes are stunning and the white surrounds against her dark skin make this a dramatic image. Well presented. TFS. Murray.

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