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shaking all over


shaking all over
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Copyright: Bev Turner (glint) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 599 W: 2 N: 429] (2789)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-14
Categories: Pets
Exposure: f/10.0, 1/1250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-15 1:03
Viewed: 258
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
For my dog happiness is going after sticks. She loves to jump fences too.
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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3157 W: 237 N: 7020] (28231)
  • [2008-06-15 1:18]

He's moving too fast for your camera Bev!!
I love how his 2 legs are raised above the ground, one in the front and one at the back!! I hope he didn't tip over :) :)
And even the shadow gives such a funny distortion. . .
It is fun to see
Janice

Hello Bev,

He's still moving on screen!
A great capture! I like how the waterdroplets are spraying out in an arch as he shakes! These are good details!
The shadow is fun! He looks to have an 's' for a head!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

hi bev,

lovely pet capture, looks like fun..

good details in the shaken water...

funny shadow on sand..lol.

cheers..harry

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3228 W: 282 N: 6427] (24121)
  • [2008-06-15 16:06]

Great action shot, Bev.
I love the timing and the details. My one small niggle is with the composition -- I'd have preferred a little more room in front of and above the subject
TFs
silke

Hello Bev,

A fine capture - the spray of water is neatly frozen in the air by the short exposure.

The composition of the image within the frame is very well thought out - an imaginary line drawn through the stick, your dog and her shadow, then down to the bottom right corner, makes a strong diagonal.

Sharp and clear throughout.

It might be interesting to get her to do it again, then try a longer exposure to introduce a blurred effect.

Regards,

Peter.

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