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Rebecca 5


Rebecca 5
Photo Information
Copyright: Martin Jordan (sticks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 28 W: 24 N: 38] (2645)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-02
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, 85mm f/1.2 L
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-15 3:20
Viewed: 338
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One softbox against a black background and a black side.The eyes may look a little strange as Becky was wearing green contacts.
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  • Great 
  • gemini (36)
  • [2008-06-15 3:23]

Stunning; I really like your lighting and the pose of your model. Well done.
Cheers
Elizabeth

Lightening, posing and compositing are professional... Well Done!

Becky is a beautiful model and Martin made another bueautiful shot here but what I do not like in this picture is her white top, not sure if it's appropriate for this particular situation (her right shoulder is burnt out and her left shoulder looks scruffy). it's just me.

her tone skin looks perfect and the eyes are ok this time.

Stunning portrait Martin, superb control of lighting...... lovely.

Regards Mark :)

  • Great 
  • linz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 77 W: 26 N: 158] (1712)
  • [2008-06-15 4:05]

Nice Light in this shot. I'm not sure about the pose I think it is not as expressive as it could have been. The lines in the hair are very bold and contribute well to the composition.
Overall I think this is very good work.

TFS Lindsay

Beautiful portrait of the beauty.

Very nice this time! Actually it's perfect on my Mac and my PC :-) Quick question for you, how far was she from the background? You say that you used a black board on her left, how big and how was was it from her?

Very nice lighting, very sharp, great work! Bravo! TFS.

Hi Martin,
Nice portrait with good light, colours and contrast. Perhaps next time you colud try a light colour as background. Anyway, good shot!
Regards,
Kristof

  • Great 
  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1195 W: 90 N: 958] (6810)
  • [2008-10-31 21:07]

Hi Martin,Another fine portrait of this lovely lady. The white top and dark skin is really something. Your portraits are very professional. TFS. Murray.

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