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Stephen 1


Stephen 1
Photo Information
Copyright: Martin Jordan (sticks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 28 W: 24 N: 38] (2645)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-25
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, 85mm f/1.2 L
Exposure: f/1.2, 1/500 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-26 13:43
Viewed: 250
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another potential entry for the NPG comp.
All C&C welcome.
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Excellent work here Martin! Marvelous lighting, a natural pose, he almost looks like the Chairman of the Board! Nice colors, really super! LOVE the white of his shaded eye! Really stands out nicely
B-)
Linda

I like the first one more than this one. Where were these pictures taken? It looks like in a court of law. You are so lucky to come across this chap, he is a brilliant model.

This is not a criticism but you always leave plenty of empty space in your pictures, I think a tighter crop especially on the right side (from the top corner) would be advantageous.

thanks for sharing.

Martin,
The first thing I notice about this photo is the great lighting. It accents the features and lines in the models face and suit.
I think the intense look in his eyes and the way you captured it is fantastic. I like this photo and I bet it would look good in Black & White. Great work.
Scott

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