Fingers-- on the rule of thirds

Critiques [Translate]

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• wbriques (1461)
• [2008-06-27 13:36]

Ron,
The composition is nice. The only things that I'm not 100% confortable is the male model looking at something else while trying to convince the woman. It takes the credibility of the scene. Technically, the shot is very good.
Cheers,
Have a nice weekend.
Wellington

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• lilimih33 (14133)
• [2008-06-27 14:43]

Hello Ron!
Perfect clarity and very beautiful scene!
Excellent picture for Fridays theme!
Best regards!
Lili

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• triggerhappy (136)
• [2008-06-27 22:52]

i can see what you mean. very sharp.very well captured, made me see the emotions.

jay

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• Regiomontana (2265)
• [2008-06-27 23:52]

For the clothing they are wearing, what I see is that she wants to go out, and he wants to stay home. While she is looking at him. What is he looking at?
I like the lighting and sharpness, but not my dried brain that can not see the important lesson you mention on your note. Can you explain it?

Lorena

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• Dot (6297)
• [2008-06-28 6:52]

Hello Ron
An intense scene of a man trying to prove his point, yet both look like they are enjoying themselves.
Good composition with lots of clarity. The B & W works well with this.
Good shot for the theme
Dot
LAter

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• Silke (24121)
• [2008-06-28 17:10]

YOu are quite right -- the fingers are perfectly positioned on the rule of thirds and despite the expressions on the two faces, my eyes keep wandering back to those fingers
Very clever illustration
TFs
silke

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• dorisday (1967)
• [2008-06-28 22:34]

Good range of black and white tones, I think I see what is distracting him!
Doris

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• Helkoryo (21996)
• [2008-06-29 13:45]

Hello Ron

What a superb sharp and well detailed capture here, good use of the rule of thirds and very well suited to greyscale. I agree on other comments that his eyes are not focused on the woman but the clarity and shine in the eye is just superb.


TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen