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A nice summer evening in Norwich


A  nice summer evening in Norwich
Photo Information
Copyright: Hans Spruijt (GreenBaron) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3059 W: 774 N: 9327] (37297)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-03
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Architecture, Decisive Moment, Mood
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC W55, SanDisk Ultra-II 1Gb
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-07-04 10:05
Viewed: 232
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A nice summer evening in Norwich

After my dinner yesterday evening, I made a walk along the river in Norwich, ending up behind the play grounds behind the Cathedral. There I found these young men playing the typical and royal game of cricket Well with the sun setting on the right side it wasn't easy to get a clear picture. In fact the light was terrible but took some shots from different POV's. It particular the scene which I like and that's why I posted it.

If you disagree, that's fine but let me know what and how to improve.

PP work
Cropped image, selected dark areas, increased brightness and after that the contrast slightly. Increased contrast and saturation of the whole picture, than adjusted gamma correction.
Add frame, resized and sharpened.

jan515, kokos101, patshoo, shelbeesmom, mvdisco, Janone, manujmehta, inaam, jonathanhart, c_rapp has marked this note useful
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  • Great 
  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2457 W: 51 N: 2860] (13522)
  • [2008-07-04 10:13]

Hello Hans,
beautiful summer light and colours of the amanzing view.This is wonderful scenery.
Greetings.
janusz

Hi Hans,
This is a great English scene you have captured here, good exposure and lighting.
Well done
Regards Andy

Hi Hans,
Beautiful composition and place.Nice colors.
Ralf

Nicely captured Hans. Beautiful colors and excellent composition.

TFS,
David

Bonsoir Hans,
Nice composition and beautiful colors , Excellent POV. and details, lovely sky .. very well done.
Michel

Hee die Hans...
Eerlijk gezegd vind ik dit er ietwat onnatuurlijk uit zien...
Dat neemt overigens niet weg, dat het een heerlijk ontspannen plaatje is. Prachtige omgeving en een mooie lucht, maar NET iets teveel....
Ik denk, dat je hier misschien met een SND filter heel goed uit de verf zou zijn gekomen! Dat zorgt ervoor dat de lucht contrast houdt, terwijl je ook op de voorgrond detaisl houdt...
Als je zo'n filter nog niet hebt, zou ik dat heel snel opnemen in de Cokin serie... 20 euri geloof ik! ;-)

Gr.,
Anneke

Hoe kun je Engeland beter laten zien dan op deze manier Hans!
Schitterend tafereel,de toren ietsje te centraal maar dat mag de pret niet drukken.
jan

Hello Hans.
Mooi stemmig plaatje met die Cricket players in front.
Het blader dak geeft het een mooie diepte en het warm getinte wolkendek maken het af.
De witte binnenrand had wat mij betreft smaller gekunt, toch ?
Groeten van Jan

It's OK for me,Express the scene close to shot that you took is the best,IMO.I like your capture the lively players in foreground,background with cathedral and attractive sky,Well of color and evening light,Good silhouette in foreground too,TFS.

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1738 W: 5 N: 382] (1348)
  • [2008-07-05 3:13]

Hoi Hans,

I start playing cricket in my middle sshool and had a bouncer which imposed a mark on my chin, since then I did not touch cricket haha. But basketball is my all time favourite and even I have been playing the university as well.

The image in view is taken from a beautiful point of view. Seems like there is a spin baller, as noticed by his style. Nice enven hue in the atmosphere is great. A beautiful shot my friend, well done.

Best gratitude for sharing this image.

interesting scene, i like the soft and warm light here, very good :)
regards
jo

I DO love these late evening shots, with the orange light and all. The only thing I would have done different is maybe not SO much saturation, the sky seems to be blasted out. I'll drag into WS to see what I can do with it. This actually is the BEST time of the day for shots here!
B-) B-)
Linda

hello hans!
this is so beautiful, great colors and nice sharpness, i like it.
tfs
zoran

pt

Love the clouds and the colors in them and an interesting pov with the baseball game being played in the fg. A nice evening picture captured. TFs
Christan

Quintessential english summer evening - people playing cricket as the clouds roll in. Always great to see someone else's views of my home city.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

Indeed Hans, it is a nice summer evening.
i like the PP work friend. i can understand the condition of the light at the moment.
nice POV. you must be aware that we Indians are crazy about cricket, we have a final match left with Srilanka in Asia cup this sunday. we hope to win the cup. lets see how our player are going to play.

so you also have an interest in this game?

regards
Manuj Mehta
:)soon

Hello Hansie

What a superb composition my friend. A very typical English country scene, lovely natural framing with the tree at the top and a beautiful view with excellent colour and details. I think this is wonderful and as per your notes I think you would stuggle to improve it ;-)

TFS regards Helen

Hello Hans,

Very beautiful composition and atmosphere, created by the evening light. Also beautiful color tones. TFS
Regards,
Sorina

Oh wauw. Wat een super mooi plaatje zeg! De lucht en de sportbeoefenaars op de voorgrond. Prachtig! mooie kleurtoon.
Echt goed gedaan.

TFS Groetjes Simone

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