Cherries

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• gerbilratz (1531)
• [2008-07-08 12:03]

So, life could be a bowl of cherries!!.. simple and well executed. Almost an abstract!!..

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• actagaudi (215)
• [2008-07-08 13:03]
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HI
I see you tried to shot cherry composition, cherries are very nice for their coloure, but on this photo they are just pale due to this BG. Red composed very well with black not with grey. This frame with grai looks like obit of cherries. next time tried to close up them. Try again, I think it is good concept.
Regards
actagaudi

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• hopalong (92)
• [2008-07-08 15:11]

Hi Laura
A very nice composition, it looks like you might have a tiny bit of camera shake but its a good picture and neatly framed
Say hello to the bigger Twinkle for me
Regards
Pez

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• hairymunky (636)
• [2008-07-09 9:07]

Hi mini

Good simple composition, with a simple background, that works well. Cherries are a bit soft, but then they'd be to hard to eat lol

Good stuff
hairy

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• Silke (24121)
• [2008-07-09 10:15]

HI Laura
I like the simplicity of this composition and the colours are really super
A couple of tips for you: to make the cherries stand out even more, choose a brighter background, and do put them a little more offcentre
Great job
TFs
silke

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• Clanyi (590)
• [2008-07-21 9:17]
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