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So what....
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Copyright: Martin Jordan (sticks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 28 W: 24 N: 38] (2645)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-17
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, 85mm f/1.2 L
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Let's Eat!, My favorite Humoristic or Funny shots, 3rd list of my favorites, World Portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-16 16:53
Viewed: 412
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Had to do another shoot with Heather (see previous posts) as she has had her locks shorn off.
Martin
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A young Annie Lennox was my first obvious reaction...

Out of all the shots of your that i've looked at, this is my favourite. The off-centre compo, the hair and eyes, the Newky Broon...all work well together. Lighting excellent, of course. I like the contrast of a pretty, delicate-looking girl drinking the man's beer through a straw

Would make a great ad poster for the brewery with a slogan fitted into the negative space.

Very nice image.

a very attractive and colorful composition.
your framing is absolute, using a black background made your subject pop-out. well done.
thanks, y2koSan

Fantastic! She looks great. I love the off-centre comp and the directness of the light here.
One of your best.
Rew

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  • Ivan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 505 W: 110 N: 277] (3668)
  • [2008-07-16 18:01]

Hi Martin,
A very good capture of her natural expression with a light that enhance the colours and perfect details. I like the way the subject is on the side of the picture. Her eyes are outstanding. Nice work, TFS,
Ivan

Olá Martin
Nice photo, colors and composition
i liked
regards from Portugal
:)

Hi Martin,

Gorgeous! Simply gorgeous. I like the dark background and that she is positioned on the left of the frame. The orange of her hair, nails, lips, and straw all compliment the tones on the bottle. Great choice of beverage for this shot. There is also a lot of mystery.

Thanks for sharing, Lisa

Hello Martin !

I agree with Richard ! Effective artwork for a brewery poster. She looks great. Everything here is perfect . Composition, light setup , her expression, her pose, sharpeness,
Bravo!
RObert

A red hair woman with a red beer!
She looks gorgeous, and the picture is, as usual, technically perfect, the left position of Heather, the pose, the eye contact, the background...
By the way, I like very much her new look!
TFS
Ciao, Antonella

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  • t-rex (80)
  • [2008-07-16 22:36]

a very attractive shot indeed. great play with the black background and color contrast.

Very interesting pose and original with the beer. Her short hair works well with the beer.
Congrats to you and to the model.

This all comes together to make a stunning shot, her hair colour, make up, nails, great compo, the black bg is great.
Regards Philippa

Hi Martin...
Beautiful portrait...
Nice colors and composition...
Best regards...
Andro
:-) later

Hello Martin!
Really great picture, again!
I tell you again, you are to good for...!!!!
Perfect work!
Best regards!
Lili

How did this one slip by me?! This is Amazing!

While im traumatized that the lovely Heather has shaved off her beautiful hair, it emphasizes how Stunning she is!

The colors here are perfect and they all blend together well. This was very well done.

How do you do your lighting man? Ive read before that you only use one fill flash, is that true? Id love to know.

Thank you for sharing this with us! You may want to contact NewCastle as they would be stupid to not buy this from you!

brilliant tones, light, colours, etc. but I still don't understand your "croping system", the pictures looks "unfinished" (altough not sure is the right adjective) without the hands (especially the right one).

but I think is just me.
B

superb as usual... perfect light, sharpness, and composition.
Indeed, Annie Lennox in Sweet Dreams... : )

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