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Heather


Heather
Photo Information
Copyright: Martin Jordan (sticks) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 28 W: 24 N: 38] (2645)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-17
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, 85mm f/1.2 L
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-20 2:30
Viewed: 249
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
No Props on this one.
All C&C welcome
Martin
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Good portrait, the black background really makes the girls face and hair stand out. Good lighting too.
Very nice work
David

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  • bupga Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 103 W: 2 N: 92] (884)
  • [2008-07-20 2:47]

Hi Martin,

Stunning portrait. The clarity and details are superv. Very well composed.

TFS....Buddy

Hi Martin.

Really nice and very punch portrait. Clearly a harking back to days of Sinead O'Connor and even further back to Annie Lennox in her "Tourist" era.

Great eye contact. Skin texture is great - although, for me, there's a bit much make up between the ears and mouth.

Great work. Paul.

Hello Martin
wonderful face, she should be professional model (maybe she is!!)excellent background for this red hair and so beautiful and clear face, excellent compo and crop, photo look like commercial of cosmetics
bravo
Magda

Hi Martin,

Heather is absolutely beautiful! Her peaches and cream complexion really stands out against the black background. And her brilliant orange hair and lips add such a "punch" to the photo. Great eye contact with the camera. Just a really neat shot. Should be an advertisement for something,

~ Lisa

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  • BT123 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 41 W: 1 N: 44] (341)
  • [2008-07-20 6:42]

Hi Martin, I like this portrait and it's much better than the previous shot you have posted. Good use of lights with no shadows and perfect skin tone. Great details around the eyes showing lovely make up and the gentle smile makes this portrait outstanding.
Best regards
Balwant

I have no words...what a brilliant portrait!!! She's beautiful...and those colours...superb!

Regards,
Carla

Very sharp and clean image. very good use of the background, leaving a portion of the head cropped is good.She has wonderful features, I think any reference to past images of other people are irrelevant, you have made a fine image of her to stand out in it's own right.

I very rarely critique or look at "people" pictures, just not my thing, but these series of your model are exceptional. Excellent work and great composition... best regards h

NO WORDS, I'm just standing up... photo and model are simply perfect.
TFS
Ciao, Antonella

Hi Martin,

Super shot, lovely projection with the black background, lovely model and super eyes.

Douglas

This one is perfect with the light !
We can see all the work made by the makeup artist.

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  • Leica Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 40 W: 21 N: 9] (852)
  • [2008-09-15 12:50]

You rock Martin! Straight in my favs.

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