MAKING TO BRIDE

Critiques [Translate]

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• parthasarathi (75)
• [2008-07-28 22:42]

A nice visual but it is not clear where it was taken?

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• Briddl (934)
• [2008-07-29 4:58]
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Hello Yogesh,

a lovely bride with a beautiful smile. And the bridesmaids look wonderful. A very colourful shot.
But let me ask if you used a flash? There are some shadows to the left and the colours are all very bright. And what are the white dots on the green carpet?
I would like to suggest that a different angle might have helped to avoid the walls on the left and right of the blue wall behind the bride.
I did a little workshop to show you what I mean. I hope you don't mind me playing around with your image.
Thanks for sharing.
Regards,
Britta

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• appalcarp (4188)
• [2008-07-30 17:40]

Hi Yogesh. The shot compo is very nice but is way too bright and the skin is washed out by the light. Posing with another bg might also have worked better as it is kind of weak and distracting with those vent things.

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• rigz (1066)
• [2008-09-05 6:37]

HI Yogesh,

Good shot for beautiful bride. Picture was nicely composed.
But something still can be done to improve the sharpness.

TFS,
Geoffrey Bin Ramji