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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Ziemowit Banaszek (ziemowitb) (17) |
| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2008-06-10 |
| Categories: Daily Life |
| Exposure: f/2.8 |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop |
| Date Submitted: 2008-08-26 16:29 |
| Viewed: 252 |
| Points: 7 |
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| To rigz: hi | ziemowitb |
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08-27 14:08 |
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- rigz
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 159 W: 0 N: 78]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-g.gif)
(1009) - [2008-08-26 17:13]
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Hi Ziemowit,
Welcome to TLS. Good shot with a sense of artistics. It's better if u crop a little bit on the bottom parts to avoid the head.
Regards,
Geoffrey Bin Ramji
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- karith
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 969 W: 46 N: 888]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-g.gif)
(6136) - [2008-08-26 17:20]
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Welcome to TrekLens! This is a good start, and an enjoyable shot. I like seeing street art from other places, and this one is quite special. I agree with Rigz that you might be able to crop out the head at the bottom, or clone it out if you have photo editing software to do that. But even with the head, I like this image and am glad you shared it with us. Good work:)
Ziemowit,
I agree with Geoffrey. The head is a distraction.
I used my editing software to remove the head and I did NOT have to use a crop.
Sometimes it's easier to show you the possibilities as opposed to just telling you. Most experienced members know that!
I have done a Workshop with the removal of the child's head.
I hope you like it!
Welcome to Trek Lens!
Scott
Hi Ziemowit,
I am impressed with the artist who paint this kind of expression . . looks real and you did great capturing it . .
I did a quick edit to your image by cropping the kid's head below . . it is just my preference . . hope you don't mind . .
Welcome to TL . . it's a lovely place to share and to learn . .
Tfs,
Tjutjut
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1031 W: 107 N: 2180]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
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Hi Ziemowit - welcome to Treklens :-)
It seems you've been given a warm welcome here already and I'd like to echo that - hopefully you will enjoy your time here.
One thing that will help is if you participate actively in the site by writing photographer's notes and critiques of other images on the site - the latter will also draw Treklensers to your own images, the site works on a 'reciprocal critiquing' system.
You've been given a couple of workshops already - they are great ways to learn. Personally I prefer Scott's one as there's a bit more work and he hasn't cropped your original shot. The shot here doesn't do much for me, I'm afraid - taking a photo of a wall doesn;t seem to teach us much and this is an example of where a note would come in handy.
Anyway, welcome!