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Under Exposed


Under Exposed
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Copyright: Ron Franklin (ron-franklin) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 249 W: 106 N: 486] (5268)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09-28
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, Canon 100-400/4.5-5.6L IS
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/30 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2008/10/03 "Under" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-10-02 1:05
Viewed: 140
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
posting early for the theme today.....and I give you.....Underexposed......only crop and resize pp with shot effect total in camera using stage lighting.

hope it meets with today's theme

regards from a very soggy Liverpool 08
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Hi Ron,

I like you idea and I think it's a great interpretation of this weeks theme.

I think your composition and lighting is great.

I do think it looks a bit out of focus or it could be camera shake considering the slow shutter speed and long focal length.

Cheers,
Jens

Cleverly done Ron. Looks like the Retro of 60's and 70's said my parents :-)
Dennis

Hi Ron,
I like the effect you have created here, the shot is well composed and would look great on an album cover.
Nice work mate
Regards Andy

Hello Ron,

This reminds me so much of painted portaits.
The effect is mysterious and thought provoking.
I like the way the brain tries to complete the obscured side of the face. One tends to see images that are not present!
A very original shot for the theme.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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  • WTS Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 289 W: 73 N: 238] (1217)
  • [2008-10-03 5:54]

Had't even thought of this for the theme, way to go Ron.

Your lighting and BG choice worked well for this. well composed in the frame work you chose.
Would agree with Jen re the focus seems a bit soft, was it hand held ? as that would certainly be a factor.
Wayne

Hello Ron

IN just a few words I think this is fantastic! I love the low tones and the balanced positioning of the image. Very clever use of a photographic term as the image title for the theme.

TFS and for joining in the theme

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