'Flying' boat

Critiques [Translate]

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• pozaru (16661)
• [2008-10-06 4:17]

Welcome to TL !

Maybe a bit more space on top would be great but I like your first photo here, anyway.


keep it up,
v
ps.Sorry, I've switched off the points system

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• dbp (3769)
• [2008-10-06 4:40]

hi Arthur
great shot and great flight.
amazing pov.
David

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• wilth (1743)
• [2008-10-06 4:48]

Hi Arthur,
Yes, welcome aboard. This is a nice composition, and as has been mentioned, leaving a bit more "room" at the top for the boat would make the image a bit more comfortable; if you look at it, seems the boat is trying to escape the frame versus reside in it.
But, nice combination of colors and lines/angles, watch the whites in that diret sunlight, however good job overall.
Thanks for sharing, have fun here, it's interesting.
Also, notes to accompany your photos and describe the scene and tech details are welcome and helpful as well.
Take care,
Wilt

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• photophantom (0)
• [2008-10-06 4:51]

Welcome to TL Arthur. Pin sharp 1st image, keep em coming Bro.
Dennis

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• Goodwitch (1356)
• [2008-10-06 4:53]

Hi arthur
Lovely shot - I like how the boat is not in the middle of the picture
Great sharpness and an interesting pov
the centre of the boat is a little oe but i like the overall composition and colours
welcome to TL
cheers
Linzi

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• rigz (1011)
• [2008-10-06 5:13]

Good shot of flying boat. I like the clarity and the clear water. Well done for good presentation.

TFS,
Welcome To TLS,
Geoffrey Bin Ramji

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• johnnymag (2351)
• [2008-10-06 6:11]

Hi Arthur,

Great first image, welcome to TL....great start. I concur with the comments already left re room and the need for notes to accompany your images.

Framing the boat slightly lower in the frame could have resulted in having a nice diagonal line through the scene which I think may have enhanced the shot. Well done and TFS,

John

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• wieyos (7502)
• [2008-10-06 7:12]

welcome to TL, Arthur.

a nice subject and nicely captured too but could be nicer with ample room on the top. the nicest thing is to complement the image with a note.

thanks for sharing
regards
Agoes

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• perryhooter (26349)
• [2008-10-06 16:33]
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Hello Arthur ,

Welcome to TL. I wish you hours of fun on this wonderful site. I will not repeat again the same comments posted by my colleagues. Instead I propose you a little workshop, with a few ideas.

KCheers!
Robert