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• chefcop (4341)
• [2008-10-12 11:47]
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The berries are back, works a lot better that the last shot. Like what you've done with the p&p

Still looks slightly over exposed though.

cheers

Peter

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• scot (313)
• [2008-10-12 13:03]
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Hi Bryan.
Have you tried to take a shot on MACRO? for a closeup. This is out of focus and over exposed.
John.

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• CameronDuncan (0)
• [2008-10-12 13:22]
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hi bryan,

good choice of berry, these rowan look great this time of year. the pp work is a little untidy, be better to have it all in focus. nice experiment, post the original in ws if you can.

regards cd

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• Jonela (549)
• [2008-10-12 15:38]
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Hi Bryan,
Like this shot a bit oe but nice. I had the same idea but you no what they say about two people that think alike well it's true fools seldom differ. Well done and tfs.
ps
See you at the weekend to compare notes. lol:)

Regards
Jon

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• photophantom (0)
• [2008-10-13 0:42]
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Hi Bryan my dear friend, I like the idea of your blurring effect here, surely enhancing the image. The point is your trimming technique. You must trim all the edges very well so that only berries will appear sharp. Not over trim or under trim. The foliage on the cherries should be clone out, so that only berries will see. If you redo it, I'm sure, it is one of your best work. I'm impressed with this new technique of yours.

P.S. I've done a WS for your to see what I mean my dearest friend. It's not the best but you can do it more accordingly. I used the photofilter for this one.
Dennis

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• dbp (3769)
• [2008-10-13 2:52]

great shot bryan
I like the unfocus on the bg.
thanks for your nice comment on
"catch me if U can".
best regards
David