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They Dont Make Them Like They Used To


They Dont Make Them Like They Used To
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Copyright: Karen Mersley (Twinkletoes) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 52 W: 10 N: 99] (647)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-10-12
Categories: Transportation
Exposure: f/4, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-13 12:57
Viewed: 379
Points: 11
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
We had the old vintage bus run come through our town yesterday. Some of them look quite funny but some even I can remember as a child!!

Weather was an extremely foggy morning and very damp.

Tight crop on the left because all the buses were lined up.

Cloned out the mirror of the one on the left.
Didn't quite know what to do with the red bus on the right.
Resized and framed.

I quite like the colours of the old buses. Hope you enjoy it too.

Thanks for looking.

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To deanophotos: HiTwinkletoes 2 10-13 15:18
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Hi Karen

I can see it was a nasty day at the time this was taken, but on my monitor it all looks a little under exposed, maybe it's time for a calibration, however, I too like the old buses like this and it's a well captured image, but, and i'm not trying to be funny here, their is quite a bit in the way of artifacts showing in the picture and it's ruining the quality of the overall effect.

cheers Dean

hi Karen
looks good Karen brings back a few menories this one cant se much wrong with the shot i might have tried to clone the ed bus out but thats just me well done
bryan

Cool bus! I do like it!

The POV and placement is pretty much what I'd expect to see - although I almost wonder if you could've made something more of the double-decker alongside? A comparison of the two?

I do think the shot could've been lightened a little.

Rew

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  • Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 378 W: 2 N: 379] (2779)
  • [2008-10-13 15:29]

Hi Karen,
I like this a lot and yes it does bring back memories seen but can't say I have travelled on one. Great capture and POV my only citicism is the frame a lighter one would be better IMHO but well done and tfs.

Jon

Maravilho design deste pequeno ônibus, magistralmete retratadio nesta foto. Beleza de trabalho.


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Karen,
your right, they dont make them like they used to...
great picture..its a shame it wasnt a sunny day or something... just a little something to bring it to life.

cngray

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