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alone
Photo Information
Copyright: BRIAN McDONNELL (trampas) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 255 W: 162 N: 508] (3633)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-06-07
Categories: Nature, Artwork, Decisive Moment, Experimental, Mood, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: FUJIFINEPIX S5700
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/280 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-10-14 14:43
Viewed: 214
Points: 19
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this was taken a few months ago. i took it very early in the morning as i was walking to work.

this should make up for the poor pic that i posted yesterday?
i promise never to use that type of pp ever again.

thanks to those offered their help. i will try out your suggestions.
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very interesting mood and subject but the top of the shot is not interesting in my very honest opinion, not at all, and I truly believe it would have been better by framing lower
regards
jc

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  • Pet Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 28 W: 0 N: 15] (145)
  • [2008-10-14 19:49]

Hi Brian !
Wow ! I like this !!!
Great use of B&W. Nice graduation of tones. IMHO, the horse is well placed, and framing is perfect.
Bravo !!!!
TFS

Pierre

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  • Nagel Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 35 W: 32 N: 55] (307)
  • [2008-10-15 0:53]

Hi Brian,
now this one I like a lot.
The faint colours with the sun trying to break through the dense fog and the bg fading into the mist are wonderful.

tfs, Heike

Oh you beat yourself up too much! Hopefully you learned some new tricks! This is very nice, you caught this boy alone, waiting for some Hay! I could walk to work too, but...dangerous.... too many trucks, too many idiots! Nice work Brian!
B-)
Linda
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Brian Hi:

Interesting artistic composition.
Congratulations, artist are always the most critical of
their own work.

I hope you are having a GREAT DAY, my friend
Larry
USA-tfs

Amazing landscape. Wonderful light.
Very good capture. Beautiful shot.

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 729 W: 11 N: 1718] (6835)
  • [2008-10-16 9:16]

Hi there. I find myself coming back to this image, over and over. There is something about it that I really find wonderful. I am not sure I can explain it, but I like it. The only thing I might change is the amount of sky to bring the trees to the third thing, but even that doesn’t detract IMO. I like when you can break the rules and get such a great result.
Warm Regards
Wanda

witaj Brian;
alone but has special mood, specially in the morning; nice pp work
very good shot;
hugs, Karolina

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 827 W: 2 N: 100] (2236)
  • [2008-10-22 23:52]

wonderful colouring of the Air
a real eary morning
v.

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  • S-moon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 255 W: 29 N: 240] (1559)
  • [2008-11-12 10:05]

Aaah..Amazing mood beacause of the mist. Very nice focus on the horse and sharp too! Great colourtone!
Well done.

TFS Greetings Simone

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