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Yellow Rose


Yellow Rose
Photo Information
Copyright: Jon Fair (Jonela) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2767)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11-07
Categories: Nature, Experimental
Camera: Sony Alpha A300, Sony 18-70mm f/3.5-5.6 Zoom, 55mm UV
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/100 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-11-08 4:13
Viewed: 236
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a departure for me as I have never taken a photo of flowers before. My wife received these roses, which were part of a bouquet, given as a leaving gift from the people at her work. I am still experimenting with this camera so please bear with me.
I would like to thank in advance all who leave comments and critiques

ISO 100
cropped
added border
resized
sharpened
all in PSPX1

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To RSK: ThanksJonela 2 11-10 13:16
To wilth: ThanksJonela 1 11-08 15:24
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Dear Jon Fair!
Amazing rose.
Beautiful light and bright.
Nice colors.
Good contrast.
Original frame.
TFS!

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  • wilth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 363 W: 46 N: 513] (1953)
  • [2008-11-08 13:40]
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Hi Jon,
Good PoV, great color and depth. On this particular monitor, which is *very* bright, perhaps just a touch of overexposure in the very center, but I think much of it may be the monitor but a little takes a bit of detail away in the centermost layer of petals.
Good job nonetheless,
TFS,
Wilt

nice one Jon lovely flowershot was a bit worried till i read your note thought you had bought the lovely elaine flowers we love in hope
regards bryan

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  • pikas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 9 N: 281] (1100)
  • [2008-11-09 8:22]

Olá Jon,

Your macro is fantastic.

Great sharpness, fantastic composition.

Good POV, superb colors.

Congratulations,

Mário

hi jon

good try at the flower, very good sharp details on the petals, nice lifelike colours and a nicely oof bg.

regards cd

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 515 W: 132 N: 968] (7074)
  • [2008-11-09 11:13]
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Now was that hard to do:) quite a first attempt Jon,you have to be pleased with the result,looking forward to more "Departures"

best regards

Ron

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2662 W: 74 N: 4764] (21697)
  • [2008-11-28 21:02]

Hi Jon...
Beautiful close up shot of yellow ross...
Nice colors and details.
Well done.
Greetings,
George

Lovely shot of a beautiful flower. I hope you bought your wife more to replace them when they had faded! :-)

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