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Copyright: bryan johnstone (luckybry) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 191 W: 3 N: 124] (1547)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-13
Categories: Action
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-08-26 8:18
Viewed: 488
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this was taken at peebels show 2005 thought it was a good shot
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To Fisher: thanksluckybry 2 08-28 07:42
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Hi Bryan,

It is a good shot but very busy. Well exposed and a beautiful setting. I like the trees in the background. Must have been a site to see.

Pull up the original, duplicate it as not to lose the original and work on the copy, click x on the original and it will go back to file, I would show you, but my photoshop is down. Concentrate on the rider and horse going over the jump. The image will go from a horizontal to a vertical one. Blur your background with the blur tool. Tight on left side and abit of space on the right, since it looks it will be going that way.
Your crop will be the centered subject, that's what I am trying to get you to do. Trust me, it will look super.
Could you do a w.s.? What a drag, mine is down.

Mike

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 600 W: 2 N: 439] (2842)
  • [2007-07-08 13:18]

hello again Bryan,
good advice from Fisher. Have a try to do a workshop yourself. Crop from the original, resize and upload as a workshop.
Bev

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