Close Encounter

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• mwebr (3398)
• [2005-09-01 18:01]
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Yep, that's pretty close and nicely done. Good title for this beauty. Love how the lips have that open sensual appeal to them.
The bridge of the nose between the eyebrows looks a little strange to me. Maybe too much selective blurring around the face. What pp work was done on the image?
Maybe cloning out the small triangular reflection in the eye but leaving the gleam on the pupil would compliment her.
Anyway, love the blonde strands on framing her face on the right side. Beautiful girl David and very much an encounter on the screen. TFS.

Michael

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• Lisar (0)
• [2005-09-01 18:37]

David, you must believe me when I say that she is one the most beautiful women that I have seen recently! Her eyes are like laser, breaking through lenses / screen and deep into ones soul. You are one lucky guy to have somebody like this to model.

But that is only half the story. The other half is you and the way you captured it. And it is not an easy task from such a close range. Great choice of bordering with blue hair on the right and the blur on the left, focusing all of our attention on her eyes and lips. Very nicely seen!

After displaying great mood and colours with Bike Wheels, distance and depth with rails, now you prove to be very good in potraits. Keep facing challenges my friend!

Compliments!

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• mlopes (196)
• [2005-09-01 20:15]
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Hi David, she's wonderfull... i think this photo could benifit if it was smaller nad landscape format, her hair is beautifull but there's not enough space.

Mario

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• ariw (2126)
• [2005-09-01 23:31]

This would have been best if not save in high compression, I see it's only 109 kb, if can be maximize so this beautiful face will give more attraction, very well captured indeed, TFS

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• masuria (450)
• [2005-09-01 23:35]
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REALLY SHE'S ENCOUNTER, AND ALSO NICE SHOT, THANKS TO DAVID, VERY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD