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girl and old house


girl and old house
Photo Information
Copyright: DAVID SPOOR (ADAMSKI) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 1] (219)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2003-08-16
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Exposure: f/4.3, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-17 6:58
Viewed: 962
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 27
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Original shot of house and foreground in bright sunlight,desaturated darkened,more dramatic sky added,girl taken by windowlight,desaturated,more contrast then added to original shot.
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Wow ! I like this
Very nice work.
Good idea, and the both pics are very well done (nice lighting)
Congratulations David

Very creative work. I like the blending of the two images. Well done.

I don't really get the concept on this photo (the mixing of the girl and house) but who cares! It's got a half naked girl on it!! ;)
They are both great photos. I am just not sure if they work with each other. Nice idea though. Good post processing.

I like the contrast; is it a contrast?
Thse are the images that can mix sensuality and fear in your dreams, where everything is possible.
Good experiment.
Huub

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2821 W: 267 N: 842] (8311)
  • [2005-09-17 10:21]

Wow! What a beautiful picture,David! I love it! So soft ,so sensual! I am very impressed! I like very much the idea to show us the beauty of the youth in such a scenery ! The light is amazing! Very well done! Congrats! Michel

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-09-18 11:01]

Mise en scène artistique !!!
Félicitations pour ce très bon travail …
Antonio

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  • fmg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 84 W: 0 N: 43] (493)
  • [2005-09-18 19:34]

A great composition and a good reason to visit your gallery. The BW tone, the dramatic sky and old house can make combination with any other element: the surprise of the seminaked, inquisitive model makes this picture a must to see. Congratulations.

Dave,

Good idea and nice composition on both, good pp work to blend.

GT

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 828 W: 37 N: 443] (3833)
  • [2005-09-19 0:51]

Hi David! I'm really appreciate what you did here. You did study & well control with lighting. The result + PP work very Nice! TFS

Wong

technically well done photo. but the model looks like paste to the photo. little bit too artificial to me. regards, Jarek

hi david,
very pretty idea,and the light conditions are so smilar and that's why very successful.I'm not so sure about her cutten hands&feet but maybe it's a negligible point.
regards

interesting juxtaposition here. The freshness of youth and beauty of the model. Her clean lines taunting the dying house in the background.

Either image would look great on it's own

Take Care,

Lance

great PP well done in BW , lighting great.,

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Christine.

ciao David!

what a fantastic compo. Quality of B&W is amazing.
see ya
denis

nice idea ... congrats....

Neslihan Kuresir
netphotoclub.com

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