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French 2


French 2
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Copyright: Dan Bachmann (danbachmann) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 93 W: 15 N: 65] (553)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2003-06-12
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Pentax PZ-20, Tamron SP 90mm f2.8, Agfa Scala 200
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-04-10 17:49
Viewed: 1227
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I only took two shots of this great character (see French 1 that explains why I call him "French"), but I am happy with both of them. I never saw the dancing bee or squirrel.

(scanned with a Minolta Dimage II from B&W positive/slide)

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I am french, but I can tell you he's not french. He does not look like one of us :) maybe all english people pretend to be french once they are pissed ??

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  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
  • [2004-04-11 11:21]

Well, he's here again. This time, it is a little bit soft but it was offset by your choice of color tones. Smart.

This man show a really interesting expression, laughing out loud. I think it would be more interesting with a more tight cropping, to focus on him, and also to place him offcenter the image. I made a WS where I also add some sharpness. Hope ou like.

Great shot Dan, He's having a fnatastic smie! Well captured.

Bravo.

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